I must say that it has been a wonderful journey here on smash words. I have unpublished all of my previous works to (hopefully) return with a new nom de plum and new style soon. For those who have followed me through the years, thank you for your support. I wish you all we'll and good fortune.
My thanks go out to Mark and all of those here at smashwords for their help and patience with my uneducated ways of writing. Trust that in time I will evolve and write even more enticing erotica for my many followers.
I find this an interesting tale. The details of the butler's attentions are well done, his duties performed as they should be. My only disappointment is that the Lord of the mannor's portion was not included, but then the story was about the butler and not the intercourse that would follow.
Just an FYI. I opened this up, curious in nature as I am. I found it easily accomplished in HTML and PDF in that I could easily zoom in to make the text readable. I found it more difficult with the Epub and Kindle since I could not read the small letter and had little way of zooming in to do so. Just thought I'd pass along my comments. Thanks for letting me know what is possible.
I found the story brief but satisfying. It could be expanded on and reveal the rest of the story, so yes, it is a tease. But it is a well written tease, so I welcome Lisa to the folds of smashwords with open arms.
What a tale! Such deprabity and lust can only be commended. I couldn't stop reading and yet had to read it a second time to believe how awesome this story is. One note, had trouble with the epub download and had to ead it as HTML, but it was worth every minute.
I loved the buildup, the characters were developed in such a way as to make them believable and interesting. I really enjoyed the way they ended up, to say what or how they made love would spoil the story for all who follow my reading. Well done sisters...:)
A short tale that enticed my craving to read on. The characters seemed developed well enough, but there were a few places I lost track. Mr. Davis's hidden adjenda in the back room could have been focused on a little more to add to the intrigue, but then I am one who craves the details to enhance a story. Well done, I look forward to another story.
Christopher may have been unknown to me before this morning, but I am already a fan. The way he tells the tale of the emotions evolving around a situation a married couple explores is exquisit. Just enough background to set the sex play in motion and then the steamy sex is nothing short of awesome.
Exquisitly writtn, exceptional characters who come to life with a reality erotica should have. Mina especailly intriguing and well done, Marco as well came to life. I will have to read every word Mrs Graves puts forth.