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The Devil's Good Intentions
on May 26, 2013
This is in dire need of some editing and there were so many incorrectly used words with dialogue that didn't seem to belong in that time, I had to force myself to finish it. Everything is so blown out of proportion, it actually made me laugh - his alpha maleness, his possessiveness, her complete submission when she started out so independently... I could go on and on, but - my advice is be prepared for lots of eye rolling and waiting for an actual plot to occur if you buy this.