Gary O'Brien

Smashwords book reviews by Gary O'Brien

  • Escape the Milky Way on May 02, 2017

    The tags say it's a children's book, a book for boys. For young boys it is a good story. The writing, however, is not very good. It appears to have been written by a young boy. A young boy that has very little knowledge of space, the time it takes to travel somewhere in space, the nature on natural bodies (atmosphere and gravity on Pluto?), etc. My opinion is that the facts should be correct so the child hearing the story learns something. This story seems a bit to immature for a child that is able to read it themselves.