Ajay Tulsiani

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Smashwords book reviews by Ajay Tulsiani

  • Fifty Shades of Love on May 20, 2014

    Each poem has a story of its own. My favourtes were 'A woman's guide', 'The long distant love', and 'The artist.' 'The argument' was funny. I wish a few poems were more like the first one, about freedom to have fun, no restraints, celebration of life.
  • The Tree on Aug. 04, 2014

    I liked the chemistry between bobby and alex, especially when alex flaunts his own mobile and bobby says, 'who texts you anyway?' that was funny. there were some nice moments, with nancy(all trees are alive, that was funny), the glow in dark stars. though there were a few typos, pov situations and too many adverbs, it was a nice story. suggestion: cut down the use of adverbs. the part where bobby's dad suggests to get the night light, instead of saying: "No," Bobby replied quickly, you can say, "No," Bobby refused the proposition. He tip-toed to the window and slowly reached out at the curtains. It's understood he's doing the act slowly. There were a few typos, overall it was a nice read.
  • The Grubbs on Aug. 04, 2014

    I had trouble understanding the part about 'the thing.' I had to read it twice. If you could make that clearer. I liked the part where Ken's dad calls the mc pauly, the dilemma paul has in introducing himself to ken.
  • Coffee Addict: Part 1 on April 06, 2015

    Nice quick read. Though it would've been much easier had there been line breaks. But overall, it was fun. I'd continue reading if there were more chapters.
  • Happy Halloween on May 13, 2015

    Funny, especially the parrot part. Cute voice.
  • A Walk in the Woods on May 13, 2015

    Nice images. The buildup was fun.
  • Snow Dragon - Winter Gloves on June 19, 2015

    Thanks for this. Nice pictures. Cute story, i wish there was more. Made me smile
  • Vice and Exploitation on July 03, 2015

    it was a great read. the writing craft is also very good.
  • Evolution on Feb. 04, 2016

    i liked this. cheered me up.