I really liked that this book had a good combination of real emotions mixed with the sex scenes. A lot of erotic literature tends to be unbelievable when it comes to the outcome of a couple making a go of a permanent relationship. This book balanced out well, making it feel like something that could actually happen in real life. It was also a very enjoyable read, it's one that I will read more than once.
This story is need of so much editing that I couldn't enjoy what I was reading and didn't even finish it. You really can't lose yourself in the world the author creates for you if you are trying too hard to sort out grammatical errors so you can understand to the meaning of each sentence.