You already leave me wanting more!! Nice character development without being too long about it. I'm anxious to read pages nine and beyond especially when you left it with high anticipation at the end of page eight!
The Spirit Escorts
on Nov. 11, 2010
I'm through Chap 7 and I'm very impressed. Impressed not only with the content (SO FASCINATING!) but the quality of the writing is outstanding. All I can say is that this is excellent so far!