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  • The End on Jan. 01, 2017

    The End might very well be a great story, I don't know. I couldn't get past the first chapter. Punctuation is severely lacking and the tense jumps from past to present in the same sentence. I don't know the circumstances this work was written under, the lack of familiarity with English or something other. It is hard to read. I do not mean to bash Mr. Grobler, Jr., kudos for being a published author (props for A: writing a novel, B: writing a zombie novel!). I do feel that this book would have benefited greatly from proofreading before publication. As I said before, it may indeed be a great story, however, getting to the end of The End is a challenge that would drive me crazy.