Dana Gass

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Smashwords book reviews by Dana Gass

  • Perfect Love on Sep. 01, 2011

    Like others here, I was driven crazy by the lack of editing on this story. I wound up taking notes on all the errors just to make me feel better about reading it. That said, I really enjoyed the story. A.M. Burns writes great action scenes and lovely, tender romantic scenes. He needs help with better characterization though. Our heroes Ethan and Dusty are well-drawn, but other characters are not given enough attention. When I found out who done it at the end, I was not convinced about motivations because the villains were not drawn thoroughly enough. A. M. Burns has a fine, clear writing voice and is an engaging storyteller, but he needs to hone his craft with a little help from folks more schooled in grammar, spelling, and word usage.