What an abysmal read. Very poorly written and author repeating information and words. Plot ok but found it very hard going to continue to read as writing so bad.
on Jan. 31, 2013
Very poorly written and poor plot. Badly edited and author seemed not to have thought through the plot beforehand. Disjointed and glad I downloaded it for free as if I had paid for this I would want my money back!
Story started out ok and then became somewhat farcical. Very poorly edited and sentences did not make sense and made the whole thing hard going to read. Would need extensive re-write and editing to make it a worthwhile read.