Good work Bree, I really enjoyed the banter back and forth in the girl's minds and the mutual seduction is steamy and sizzlin' hot. Erotic, short as others have said but easy to read and enjoy... love it babe.
I can't remember the last time I read someone's diary before but there is a certain intimacy involved in the act. Funny because Mikey the protagonist claims to be emotionally devoid and distant, all the same his 'Confession' shows a complex character full of depth and feeling for those around him. His job (at least I thought anyway) was simply a vehicle to move the story along and it works well I think. The characters are what kept me reading to the end.