Untamed Dreams Curse Of The Opal
on Feb. 08, 2011
The plot is interesting and it compelled me to keep reading. Unfortunately, there are quite a few grammatical errors, which can make reading through a bit difficult at times. I think that this book would benefit a lot from a thorough round of editing to sort out the grammatical errors and tighten up the prose. With those things remedied I think it would be quite good.