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  • Goodnight Daddy on Jan. 16, 2013

    GOODNIGHT DADDY by LOLA SWAIN Lola Swain is a great writer and this mini book is well written and well constructed. Having said that, I must admit that I didn't enjoy it much at all because of the really strong lesbian content, something I didn't realise when I purchased it (because it wasn't marked as such). Like most people I enjoy variety in my reading matter, but with a ratio of about 7:2 in favour of "girl on girl" action, it was just a bit much. It wasn't the least bit offensive, just rather page-turningly boring. It was written in the first person by "Kitten" who had lesbian sex with (1) her mother, (2) a girl at school, (3) her step-sister, (4) a woman she babysat for, (5) that woman's maid, (6) her step-sister (again) and (7) a female co-ed her step-brother picked up in college. There were two males in the story, both of whom were curiously shy of penetrative sex. Instead they both masturbated up a storm all over their ladies, which quite frankly became quite boring after a while. The step-father even intruded in a lesbian romp between his daughter and step-daughter, masturbated with them without speaking, and then slunk away again. Quite creepy actually! This was a collection of six one-chapter stories, which could also be bought separately. I bought them together to make a cohesive story, but these short-comings may be less evident if each story was purchased separately and read over a longer period of time. Kixxarz