I agree with another review. I want to see what happens next. Two real people in this story and I like that. It was more like a tease. This is one of many books I got during a free sale and would be pissed off if I paid for it. $1.99? If it were longer and the people went a little further into some hot action it might be worth it. For free it was nice.
Pretty hot for such a short book. One of many books I got for free. Better than some of the books I read that were this short. Would be upset if I paid money for something that ended so fast. But it was still hot.
So glad I moved this to the front of my reading list. I have not read a good romance like this in a long time. I was surprised at how fast it was to read. I love these characters. This is a very moving story. Five stars for sure.
This is pretty good. There were parts where I think it moved too quickly. It was very interesting and not for the erotic parts. The stories were fun. I expected them to be sexier. But still it was overall really a fun read.
I don't agree with the other review that this was dreadful. I like stories about masturbation, I guess. :) Like a lot of books I review here, I got them for free. I am very, very surprised that so many people think you should charge money for something so short. A dollar is a dollar! I can buy full size novels at Amazon for that. I would not recommend paying for this. If it was longer, then maybe. But I still liked it. I like how the author talks about how much he likes "playing."
This is one of only a few books I got for free during a special that I think I should have paid for. I will buy something from this author in the future. :) Nice book length. The story was good and I couldn't put it down. Would say more but don't want to spoil anything. Very good. I would read more from this author for sure.
I started reading this and had it confused with another book. But I was pleasantly surprised. I am so glad I found it! This is a nice romantic story and I highly recommend it. I love the characters and the setting. It's a very enjoyable book.
I read through this again before coming here to leave my opinion. It would be better if there was no sex at all because it was bland. So very bland. The most bland sex ever. It was rushed. I might have given it four stars if it was someplace besides the erotica section. I was surprised to see it here. I got so many free books during a sale, I wasn't sure what was what until I started reading. This is more like a kind of sexy romance. It's not even close to erotica. It's not sexy. Did I say how boring the sex was? Poor descriptions of the action. Otherwise, this was a nice little book.
I had higher hopes for this boring book. The worst line was "It makes a serious impact on me somewhere deep. I feel unbelievably erotic." Did a robot write this? Most of the book sounds just like this. It's very boring. Another bad one is "Oh, I realize happily, I am definitely loving this!"
There is nothing interesting here.
I know better than to expect much from a short story, so I will not judge this book based on its length. I found it disappointing that the story was very interesting until the sex started. The set up was great. The whole book seems really well written. But the sex was boring as hell. The set up almost seems wasted on a short little erotic book like this. Also, the dialog was stilted and not much fun.
To Ms. Cherry Fine - I'm no expert, but the beginning of this book could be the perfect beginning of a different novel. A thriller? Crime fiction? Instead of them hooking up and having bland sex, she could go crazy and kill the cop? I never write a review like this. I think you are a great writer. I just found nothing erotic about this book I found in the erotica section, but I very much enjoyed your writing.