An Honest Mistake: A Humor Tale
on Dec. 28, 2012
I'm sorry, but I found no humor in this story at all. It at times was confusing. A page and 1/2 of description to set the scene was overboard. It filled my mind with the picture of two teenage girls wrapping gifts, then they are talking with their mother about buying bourbon and vodka? How old are these girls? Daley was thrown in the mix on pg 19 with no previous mention so I had to keep reading to find out it was the dog. The part that was obviously supposed to be the humor, the eating of the dog cookies, came across as a sibling argument because of the name-calling and indifference. Sorry, I did not care for it...I feel sorry for this family.