I must have read a completely different book to the other reviewers. The lead character was one of the most irritating I have ever read. I kind of got that it was probably deliberate by the author - perhaps attempted irony but for me it didnt work at all. I guess that the author was trying to be funny but god, it was lame.
Basically the book consists of some fairly minor disasters (considering almost the entire population is gone) where the main character does nothing except look for cake. Does the author have issues with food?? The actual crisis was probably one of the most unrealistic I have ever read - civilization ends and they go bowling and eat chips - this isnt a statement though as the lead character seems to think it will all somehow work out all right. As long as he has cake and can go bowling, all is right with the world. Not realistic which is ok if author was going for some kind of statement. I really dont know what the author was trying to say - "stockbrokers are completely useless for anything worthwhile but like crap, tend to float to the top even when flushed??" - maybe that works as a theme.
Post apocalyptic is one of my favourite genres and I have read a LOT but this one was a major let-down.
This book was not witty, cute, exciting or anything that I look for in a good book. Dont think I will bother with the next one.
Enjoyed this mystery a lot. Livvy (main character) was feisty and likeable. Suspected who the crooks were but did miss the twist so that was good. Love interest was fun. A good quick read - I will look out for others in the series.
This was an excellent book - a nice change from the usual zombie trope with a nice touch of uncertainty about who is human and who is deviant. Note to potential readers - this is not a zombie book - it is much more than this so dont bother if you just want a blood-fest.
Thoroughly enjoyable - flawed characters who were both doing their best to survive and be human in an awful world where they system works against humanity.
Enjoyed this fantasy book quite a lot - there are a lot of characters but it is coming together nicely. Nice to read a fantasy that is not the usual dragons/orcs/elves. The worldbuilding was effective and interesting. The lead character is good - am intrigued at her story and thinking there is a lot more to learn about her. Am interested enough to want to keep reading so have just purchased the next book in the series. Recommended.
I am a big fan of post-apocalyptic books but sometimes the writing can be a bit dodgy. Not this one - excellent story, interesting characterisation and it wrapped up nicely while still leaving a bit more to tell (hate cliff-hangers for no point). Will definitely be reading more of this author.
Really enjoyed this book and the preceding one. A nice change from the usual zombie stories - dont mind a good one but they get a bit tiresome. At least this "world ending" story had a bit more to keep me interested - obviously the author understands that real monsters do not need to be zombies - sometimes, they are just people who have been pushed past their limits and can run riot in a world without rules. Really enjoyed the lead character - a feisty woman who is not one-dimensional. Very interested to read the next instalment.
I was in two minds about purchasing this book - I was happy enough with Book 1 to shell out for the second but I dont think I will be reading any more of these. The stories are quite interesting and there is enough action to make it entertaining - not quite on the edge of my seat exciting but ok for a quick read.
I guess my main problem is the same as the only reviewer here who marked it down - I am just not finding this heroine believable. Alexis is pitched as someone who can pick up complicated skills in just a couple of days - something that would take a professional a long time to perfect is picked up with little effort by this paragon of excellence. It just got really irritating.
I was hoping for a little more character development in the second book but am finding them a little one-dimensional. The identity of the assassin Penumbra was a nice touch but couldnt be really called a plot twist since it was telegraphed from a great distance.
A few minor typos and incorrect use of words (eg. you do not "advert" your gaze) but editing was reasonable for a self-published book. Good effort though.
The story was quite good but the editing atrocious. Constant spelling mistakes, misuse of words and awkward phrasing made this quite hard to read. Reasonably suspenseful storyline although the love interest was a bit hard to believe given that the hero of the story was supposedly in deep mourning from the recent death of his lover - I would like to think a real man would grieve for more than 5 minutes before switching to someone new even if he did end up saving the world.
Would encourage author to keep writing - I mostly enjoyed the book - but strongly recommend he ask someone to proof-read before publication.
I really tried to get through this book (got 72% through) but just could not keep suffering through it. Kept hoping that eventually it would improve but it was just incredibly boring. I am quite forgiving of poor writing (poor grammar or bad spelling) if the storyline is gripping or perhaps the story might be a bit slow but the writing is done well enough to keep you going. Unfortunately this book had no redeeming qualities at all.
I understand that Brynna is categorised as an antiheroine with a complicated past - she just came across as a pretentious little girl with an attitude problem. Note to author: genius is NOT having a very large vocabulary such that every sentence she speaks is 3 times longer than it needs to be - it could have been funny but it was just silly. Everyone (including Brynna) kept saying how smart she was but I've met road sweepers who were smarter and a lot nicer people to boot. There seemed to be an obsession over the age difference between Brynna and James - dont know why but I just could not get interested enough to care about either of them.
I dont think the author could decide what kind of novel this is - the science (space travel, etc) was completely illogical to work as science fiction, the end of the world was completely glossed over so apocalyptic fiction doesnt work, the aliens and magical (??) powers were not really explained so I could not get into it as a fantasy novel, the characters were so annoying and unsympathetic that it didnt work as a romance either.
Main problem was that the story was too boring - it was like reading Twilight all over again but at least I did manage to get through the first volume of that series. I really tried with this one but it defeated me.
Sorry to give such a negative review - I know that a lot of time and effort goes into writing these novels. It was just not worth the time I spent trying to get through it (and the subsequent volumes are even longer !!). At least one other reader enjoyed it but for me, it did not work on any level.
Enjoyed this book very much. Did not notice the spelling/grammar issues too much as the story kept me rushing along to find out what happens next. Good action sequences and the characters were interesting. Recommended - am definitely going to read more from this author.