Any kind of humor is subjective and while this might appeal to some and be very funny, I am clearly not the target audience.
This piece seems a little angry even though it's satire, there are typos and the words don't flow as smoothly as in this author's other work. I'm still a fan of this author, just not this story. :(
Interesting. I have often thought that humans are caught in sort of an endless loop - we are distanced by technology because we 'talk' online more than we talk in person, thus technology is what brings us together - sort of a double-edged sword.
This piece focused on 'why' people post what they post on Facebook. Have you given any thought to the broader topic of humanity and technology?
I like the premise, but I feel like there's a lot of this story missing. I think this could be expanded to a really frightening tale. Looking forward to being truly creeped out in more of your future writings.