Down on the Beach
on June 11, 2014
I've looked at several dozen erotica publications on here over the last week. Alessia Brio is the first author I've come across that has any idea how to structure a story. For this, I am bothering to review her work. Wannabe authors take note: look at your story structure, consider the words you use. Avoid cliches and stay away from adjective overload. Nice, Alessia. Style reminds me of Raymond Carved.