I enjoyed this story and really got into it so that I read through it in an evening.
I did notice a problem with the surname O'Neal/O'Neill. The script is very rough and will benefit from being smoothed out so that the story flows better.
I think that finished, proof-read and edited to remove errors and oddities it could be a very good story. To finish it as a memorial to your friend's wife would be a nice thing to do.
This book kept me glued until the end and then I thought I want more. Plenty of action but violent scenes are tempered with restraint so there is no excessive gory details or violence (beyond what you would expect of two wolves fighting). Although there are love story lines woven in this is a story of the birth and growth of a new pack and the problems they tackle along the way. If you love wolfies I think you will love this.
Great story - Loved it
This is a keeper and I was glad to read that more are in the pipeline and I look foward to reading them. Lots of humour - It make you laugh with the odd sad scene to stop it being overly sweet.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Loved this story and sat down reading it from begining to end.
The thread of humour running through the storyline stops the action overwhelmimg the book. I was left looking forward to this author's next release which will hopefully be in the near future.
A book I would be happy to recommend to others. Like Sherry I will be reading this book again probably more than once.
Thank you Brian Clark for yet another great read.