Location: United Kingdom
Member Since:
Sep. 21, 2012
Mike Holloway
Smashwords book reviews by Mike Holloway
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Extreme Malice
on Sep. 21, 2012
Wonderful original idea for a plot. The story works really well with good interchange between the main characters but unfortunately the author has been severely let down by proof readers and editors. The story hic-coughs along with disparities and errors describing individuals, stating Brenda when it is Donna that is under discussion for instance and then mixing Jack up with Joss. [Who's this "Jason" mentioned below!! There are spelling typos leaving "lightning" as "lighting" and other stupid errors. It is very distracting and detracts from a smooth, brilliant story. Well done the author. Boo, hiss the back up. 2 stars should be 5 if..... Perhaps others won't notice.