THE SHARPEST KNIVES IN THE DRAWER is part three of HOLLYWOOD HACK JOB, a three-part story. Part one, FALSE ICONS & SACRED COWS, and part two, THE HONEY TRAP are available now. The full novel will be available later in 2017.
THE HONEY TRAP is part two of HOLLYWOOD HACK JOB, a three-part story. Part one, FALSE ICONS & SACRED COWS, is available now. Part three, THE SHARPEST KNIVES IN THE DRAWER, will be available August 2017.
Fr. Arthur Gerdtz is on a mission from God. His church is fighting for relevance in the modern world. Attendances are dwindling, atheism is on the rise, and Instagram celebrities are bigger than Jesus. This veteran priest is in grave danger of losing his religion.
Until he decides to introduce some Old Testament values to the twenty-first century.
Ladies and gentlemen, I think we've found the ebook equivalent of Ed Wood & Uve Boll! 1 star for the effort, and 1 star because Drac sounds like a pretty cool guy - see http://www.salon.com/2014/08/17/portrait_of_a_self_published_author_drac_von_stollers_invisible_literary_empire/
Good story, characters were nicely drawn, and some excellent descriptive language.
Tip: try to eliminate "began" wherever you can - e.g. instead of "His heart began racing again..." just write "his heart raced again".
Also, watch out for repetition: e.g. "As her eyes looked around the room, her eyes caught..."
Other than that, nice work!