i loved how the story flowed through the 12 tasks- intertwining the emotions of Pierre and Andromeda. I also notice you have other stories on Amazon. I hope you will make those available on Smashwords.
More than that I hope you will tell us how things went for Pierre and Andromeda i.e. if the story has not already reached a final conclusion.
after having read this story, i feel that all the previous volumes built up to the moment of tim with his slave in the cabin but this volume seems to have rushed through that part to get to the angle of the society episode. i hope you wont rush through tim and mom episode in the next volume.