i loved how the story flowed through the 12 tasks- intertwining the emotions of Pierre and Andromeda. I also notice you have other stories on Amazon. I hope you will make those available on Smashwords.
More than that I hope you will tell us how things went for Pierre and Andromeda i.e. if the story has not already reached a final conclusion.
after having read this story, i feel that all the previous volumes built up to the moment of tim with his slave in the cabin but this volume seems to have rushed through that part to get to the angle of the society episode. i hope you wont rush through tim and mom episode in the next volume.
first of all it is good to see fortunata alive and kicking.
this story had an interesting plot twist in this book. but after having read it i think it makes sense. i still wish there were some scenes between sara and timmy and i will wait for the next chapter.
the writing is as usual very polished.
The story had meandered a little but it feels not it is back on track.
As usual, the writing was polished. This episode did suffer a little from a lot of hectic events and a swarm of characters. And some people will like it. But for me, what kept me glued was that the three main characters were still in focus.
Though I am not sure how the story title will match the content any more, now that this important event has happened in Tim's life.
Please keep writing, may be also add more episodes to Leon's and Twisted Desire.