Looking for a Master, The Twelve Labors of Andromeda
on Oct. 20, 2013
i loved how the story flowed through the 12 tasks- intertwining the emotions of Pierre and Andromeda. I also notice you have other stories on Amazon. I hope you will make those available on Smashwords.
More than that I hope you will tell us how things went for Pierre and Andromeda i.e. if the story has not already reached a final conclusion.
on Nov. 24, 2013
the last part was a little uncomfortable as it is really happening in some parts of the world but other than that i really enjoyed the story.
eagerly looking forward to your next story.
Runaway Train (Book One)
on Dec. 01, 2013
i agree. the writing is good and kinda focuses on emotions of the totally submissive female.
Mother's Submission (Book One)
on Dec. 01, 2013
the writing is good. i got hooked on this story line and i am eagerly waiting for the 12 installment. these books should not be free :)
Mother's Submission (Book Twelve)
on Jan. 09, 2014
after having read this story, i feel that all the previous volumes built up to the moment of tim with his slave in the cabin but this volume seems to have rushed through that part to get to the angle of the society episode. i hope you wont rush through tim and mom episode in the next volume.
Mother's Submission (Book Thirteen)
on Sep. 14, 2014
first of all it is good to see fortunata alive and kicking.
this story had an interesting plot twist in this book. but after having read it i think it makes sense. i still wish there were some scenes between sara and timmy and i will wait for the next chapter.
the writing is as usual very polished.
Mother's Submission (Book Fourteen)
on March 13, 2015
The story had meandered a little but it feels not it is back on track.
As usual, the writing was polished. This episode did suffer a little from a lot of hectic events and a swarm of characters. And some people will like it. But for me, what kept me glued was that the three main characters were still in focus.
Though I am not sure how the story title will match the content any more, now that this important event has happened in Tim's life.
Please keep writing, may be also add more episodes to Leon's and Twisted Desire.
The Strongest Bond
on July 03, 2017
definitely worth it. the story was really well developed.