Great work. I enjoyed it because it managed to evoke a mood, a sense of danger or stakes, while still offering the outline of both dominant and submissive personalities. With erotica I don’t always want to make a big investment of time and effort with any given character or story arc. Sometimes a sensibility is a better target than a character study or something with a longer plot. But the big problem with flash is that it's over too soon. You feel that with this one, but it’s a free sample of the author’s work, loaded with excerpts of other paid titles, so I don’t feel cheated. I’d read more from this author. What I’d really like to see is a collection of more of these fine shorts. Flash is hard, but this one was really good. Well done!
Larry Archer has a beautiful home in Vegas, a sexy wife with real boobs, and a strip club where none of the strippers know he is the owner and yet they all think he is a god. Why not? He really is a classy guy. That's why when he discovers poor little Beth abandoned and shivering on the side of the road, he offers to help. What else could he do, being the kind of guy he is? He and his wife take the little stray into their house and watch as she slowly comes to realize what her true mission in life might be. This is a hard core sexual romp through some pretty intense and imaginative sex. It's not really big on plot or narrative, but if you're wondering what it might feel like to live the lifestyle of hedonist, this is the title for you. Tag along as sweet Beth learns the ropes in Sin City, USA.
Josh Daniels is a delightful bastard. Nineteen year old Tammy is innocent, pure and wholesome. Put the two together, sprinkle in some hard luck, and you have the makings of an incredible story. But this one for the lovely build up, the trembling lip and shaking hand. Lovecraft knows how to deliver!