Let's see hmmm? Where to start? These things are always sort of unfair. I have to tell you all about me but... You never tell me about yourself. Sort of one sided don't you think?
Okay first, this is a pen name. I actually use several for the various genres I Write in. Some cross over and some don't, and no, I don't intend to share the other names here, simply because there is a certain anonymity in it, I happen to enjoy. Besides this is Erotica no one uses real name or even common pen name.
My stories? Well most people ask where they come from? I don't know. But if you find out send me an email and let me know.
Usually it is the characters who show up in my head, and I often don't even know what I will be writing until I have typed a few pages. Then it is like "Ahhh A Romance" or "oooh Horror" or "E-GADS PORN!!!!" ;)
About my writing? Well I have practically admitted i have no control over it, so what more is there to say? I am not conventional in my style or my methods, I know this. There is no need to leave me a review telling me I head-hop or my punctuation is terrible. You know what? It's fiction... I punctuate expressivley, not for english class.
As for head-hopping? Guilty as charged, but there really is no hard or fast rule against it. It comes down to preference, I prefer to do it and if you can't keep up, obviously you prefer not to read it. And in 5 or 10 years, it will be the IN thing in writing and everyone will be doing it and everyone will be reading it. It come down to style. It's the way writing works. But I don't work that way. I write a scene as I see it. If a character has something to express, well then it is going to show up on the page. Nuff said. For the most part my readers have told me my stories are easy to follow and they enjoy seeing a scene from different perspectives.
Also I use a lot of dialog. Once again, I like to let my characters tell the story, not some cold narrative voice... I had a wonderful review once where my writing was described as making the reader feel as if they were a fly on the wall. I liked that. It is what i aim to do.
Well that's all folks. I hope you give my writing a chance.
My email is always open email@example.com
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Smashwords book reviews by Pixey Bitters
on Nov. 13, 2010
The story isn't bad at all, but the formatting is terrible. I invite the author to contact me I will be more than happy to assist in helping her to correct this issue with this story and the other. I know from experience how diffucult it can be to get it right. :) otherwise good a story.