l fry


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Smashwords book reviews by l fry

  • Distant Star: Episode Two - Far Future on Sep. 29, 2010

    Loved this story; It caught my interest instantally, could not stop reading untill the end. Original story line. Well worth reading, great mystery. This could be converted to book form. I now want to read more of your writings. I gave this a 4 star because it was a play and not a short story, and had two typos that slowed down the reading and had to stop to figure out what the word was
  • Distant Star: Episode One - In The Twilight on Sep. 29, 2010

    Don't let screen play stop you from reading this short story. I love the story and could not stop untill the end and still wanted to read on.
  • The bulldozer ploughed on on Nov. 01, 2010

    I found this story to elusive. It did not make any sense. Even for a young adult to read you wait for something to happen. It did not delelop into a plot or an ending.
  • Playground on Nov. 02, 2010

    Loved the short story a little disturbing, but a fabulous read. Can't wait to read your next story.
  • Too Little Too Late on Nov. 02, 2010

    Great story, imagine this as truth in real life. So when older, wiser, and single I never tried to turn back and contact the one that got away. Keep up the writing, looking forward to reading your other works.
  • Exhale of Death on Nov. 02, 2010

    Good suspense, kept me interested with your detail in writing. Great little story, loved the ending, will be looking for more of your works.
  • The Complete Guide to the Year’s Best Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror on Nov. 18, 2010

    I do not recommend this e-book; it is just a list of writers and the name of the novels. No description or category as to what it is (example Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror ). Because some writers will do 3 kinds of works, so if you wish to read horror instead of fiction that info should be readily available. I have a database that does exactly that. (ex. Title, author, genre, description,) This is put together so badly that I can only give 1 star for effort.