Random Femme

Smashwords book reviews by Random Femme

  • Eternal Light: A Hound Series Novel on Sep. 09, 2012

    I completely agree with Jackie Reed. It was a really great story but there were so many errors in vocabulary, grammar and spelling that it was distracting. There is also too much repetitive phrasing. I think this author could use a really good editor to polish. The story was really good but the writing was, unfortunately, really bad. The author has a very creative imagination and just needs help with editing.
  • A Vow of Tears: The First Vow on Nov. 02, 2012

    Be warned...this author hates Christians and Christianity so the view of them is pretty heinous. Good writing style and plot lines are easy to follow. I enjoyed the jumps to her past to explain her story and I think the author did a good job of it. Usually it comes off as lame but this writer made it a very interesting story line.