Amazingly funny, this is easily one of the best books I've found online. The only problem I had was that nobody, besides the wizard Mercury, does anything. They all just run around waiting for Mercury to come save them. but that's a minor complaint in the ocean of good that is this story.
This is a fun and exciting story following a teenager as he falls into a world of magic. My main problem is not with the cliche plot, but with the authors tendancy to get caught up in inconsequential details. I felt like yelling at my screen "who cares about money, get on with the story". But aside form a few flaws it was an extremly entertaining story.