This is a fun read with some nice twists and turns. Saying much more will spoil the plot. It is written in a light hearted and amusing manner.
Daddy's Poker Game
on May 11, 2013
Badly written horrible story of misplaced trust. Actually a turn off.
A Lady Undone: The Pirate's Captive
on June 04, 2013
I did not find this particularly riveting. I does not make me want to read the sequel. The plot is OK but the writing is not particularly good
I agree with Jay Patterson that the plot and ideas are good and fresh and in that the mixing of past and present tenses is a major problem. I felt the whole book could do with fleshing out of both the characters and the plot.
An interesting idea for a story and then a series and a very titillating read. It starts off quite believable however some of the sex ,get well into the realms of fantasy towards the end.
The character interactions are describe quite sensitively
The main character.Rory, goes too rapidly from being a shy teenager to a domineering sex machine.
It suffers from poor proof reading and at times confusing descriptions of the scenes.
It does not make me wish to read more of the series.