Thoroughly enjoyable, 9/10. (2 cover pictures ?)
One of the best 1 to 1 Teacher/student stories, which I personally enjoy far more than the wannabe teen-gangbang types. ( .'. great paced visuals engendered)
A sequel would be nice but I imagine draining for the author to get right (Summer of Love and Exploration).
An interesting story with no jewels, PCs, or other mystic crap in site.
Basically Jacob find a "rabbit hole" within his very own house!.
The files he finds remind me of "Basic" programming, on which he adjust with the subtly of club hammer.
This is too short or could be expanded by a much larger second book, but maybe the author could not expand beyond their knowledge !
Liked the authors other arc storys eg: Hypno-Sis
A standard theme not left wallowing with all the others, but polished and presented to a Rolls-Royce standard. Injected with love bent round a soul destroying arid industry, those souls pursuing what one might perceive a vacuous career.
I read this work, then immediately wrote this review, I so enjoyed this 5 star story. "Well crafted" even the transition point was handle with emotion and aplomb
The characters certainly spoke to me, I was pleased, you will be too.
All a girl could wish for no responibilities, unleased fanasy and hunky men and women she will never see again.
A sexy holiday adventure.
The Princess and the Goblin
on July 22, 2017
This leaking Kettle/caldron has loose rivets.
The perceived Monster turn into true Monster at the end of two Weeks !!
No sense of Dom Responsibility, lack of planning leads to hasty ill conceived decision, is lead by the nose from a Internet Squire he's never met (without even a option to buy back).
Suggest a follow up story explaining how he was hoodwinked , the squires forum account was hijacked following the death of his wife/slave, (depression, lack of commitment). and a slaver took over looking for this very event.
Following the agreement the girl shortly after is invited to Spain for a pre-get together holiday. Sun, Sea a fast fishing boat.
Too bad for the victims, for there must always be victims
An interesting genre, one I have never fully explored.
It has a sci-fi element which I adore, and one could alway daydream a different route through life, equipped with the easy ability derange the male perspective within it seems certain preconceived limits (wherever they originate from ??)
It free but is worth money, try it, if just for the perspective ....