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Smashwords book reviews by sac12389

  • Her Name in the Sky on Feb. 01, 2014

    It's good. The cliche of everyone drinks and parties all. the. time. gets a bit tiring. Parts in the middle/end are over dramatic. I questioned the legality of a few plot points. Sometimes there are too many active characters in a scene and it gets confusing to follow. For a story with a large romance element the protagonist and her love interest have few scenes alone. But overall I viewed the story positively.