D McKillip

Smashwords book reviews by D McKillip

  • A Pittsburgh Storm on Sep. 17, 2010

    I wouldn't mind reading a sequel. The story held my interest throughout. One major thing bugged me in the book. The protagonist is an English major and he starts paragraphs with "And" and "But". I'm not an english expert but remember in school you aren't supposed to begin sentences with these words, let alone paragraphs.