Interesting concept. Good way of telling a story. I felt like I was right there most of the time. It seemed a little familiar at times, like I was watching Smallville made into a movie, only a hell of a lot better. If that was your intent, you made it real for the first time ever. Smallville is just too flat. I liked the storytelling when Victoria was possessed by the Dark thing. Good progression and handling of the occult. Since this is a series I hope there will be a lot more of these books.
The torture chamber scenes had me riveted to the pages. I like to see stories where the main characters look as though they may not make it through at all. Makes it more suspenseful for me. What a perfectly superb villain in Cyrus.
I have to admit I read this author's "Cowboys and Olympians" and wasn't all that impressed. Nevertheless, I read this book, the Call Guy, and loved it. Having been a "call guy" in a customer support service center at one time in my life, I can see how this could happen and wish it had to me.
This author excels at erotica and needs to keep writing it, maybe a bit longer? I like short stories on sex, but I like them a little bit longer than what this story is. Still, it was entertaining and exciting and got me seriously hard.