Want to overhaul your looks?? IN a closed, conservative and multilayered society like India?? Think again, my friends... :) The dating pool is small enough and the fish not always gold. A few experiences after my deeply contested decision.
Two short pieces, n a slightly longer one.
Wouldn't go so far as to say the two are poetry,but yes, it's not prose :)
Do revert back to me. all comments welcome, good, bad, and even painful. :)
seriously??!! why english?? the language has been abused to such an extent as to make reading this torture!! the stories by themselves are interesting enough. if only reading them wasn't such a pain!!! kindly proof read. or get someone to do so!!!
the previous reviewer must be related to you, or in a real rush to get through the story!!
it had a lot of potential, unfortunately was completely massacred by the writing style!! were you TRYING to sound like some catalogue?!!
the characters weren't fleshed out. the plot left unexplored. it might as well have been told in 5 lines flat....
sorry, if i sound too harsh...but either leave"romance" noovellas to women...or stop tagging it as "romance"!!!
Barring a few spelling mistakes, the english was a lovely change from the hack job one sees these days, especially online, in the guise of free content.
Kind of predictable at times but definitely gripping. Faintly reminiscent of hunger games :) But that's just me.
It is original, refreshing and has interesting perspectives with a few unforgettable catch phrases that i wouldn't want to share here for fear of giving too much away.
Thank you... I enjoyed myself :)
You are quite spot on about the decreasing attention span! But i read it through in one sitting.. It's 2:30 am my time..
All Against All
on April 06, 2016
At times it seems it's written by a teenager...