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Smashwords book reviews by sjhunter451

  • Orestes: The Young Lion on Nov. 24, 2012

    Note: In the interest of full disclosure, I received a free copy of The Young Lion in return for an honest review. The story of Orestes is a well-known classical myth in the Atreid cycle so I'm not too concerned about spoilers. Still, just in case... The young Mycenaen prince Orestes endures a particularly horrific family trauma, escapes into exile, grows up, and returns home to... What earned stars? The author is obviously passionate about Greek history and knows a lot of cultural detail, which she uses liberally and competently to flesh out the bare bones of the classical history. As someone who has been to Mycenae, I enjoyed her use of the setting to describe daily life in the palace and the city. Clytemnestra and Elektra, as seen through the narrator's (Oreste's) eyes, are fully developed characters and their motivation is comprehensible, even worthy of some empathy. What didn't earn stars? Orestes gives us a lot of factual details about his activities, but only the shallowest of introspection. Admittedly, when he starts his narration he is only a child, but his character never seems to grow in complexity or insight. He wasn't just unlikeable, he was boring. Which brings me to my biggest problem with the book: it doesn't end. It builds and builds all too slowly to a climax that never occurs. For this reason I debated a two-star rating which, frankly, might have been all it earned if I had paid for the book. Only the quality of the detail and the writing kept it at three. I suppose it is a matter of opinion that a book should actually have a climax and a satisfying ending. I don't object to cliffhangers that encourage a reader to continue the next book in a series, but I find it bothersome not to have been rewarded with something after all that detailed build-up. Certainly the story justifies multiple volumes, but why not give a climax and then in the next one use it as a traumatic memory with some fresh insights? As it is, I wasn't intrigued enough to move on to the next book.
  • Whores: not intended to be a factual account of the gender war on March 01, 2013

    Say in the near future men’s rights get a real foothold in the U.S. political arena and women’s reproductive rights take a plunge. Not a controlled dive, but a hit-the-bottom-of-the-quarry, backbreaking dive. Would a lot of women fight back? With lethal force? In Nicholas Wilson’s “Whores” we are treated to a dystopian near-future U.S. in which they do. As the gender war progresses, the reader gradually hears the chilling personal tales of the fanaticized women in one particularly active cell. What I love about near-future speculative fiction is that it functions as a “what if…?” If it is well done it offers us a mirror for subtle commentary on contemporary society while at the same time offering an exciting story in which readers get some tantalizing glimpses of where science and technology might take us. ‘Whores’ emphasizes sociology over hard sciences and technology to an unusual degree, as it successfully gives a number of freedom fighters unique voices in a society that has shut them out. Frankly, it was all pretty horrible, as it was meant to be, and that made ‘Whores’ a surprisingly compelling read. To the author’s credit this is far from a one-sided story although it is hardly even-handed: there are good and bad men and women and likeable and unlikable police and terrorists. On the whole it seemed well balanced, although it would have been nice to hear something from someone functioning in society but not part of the actual warring parties. There is a lot of crude language and violence, including sexual violence, in ‘Whores.’ That’s my warning, because otherwise I strongly recommend ‘Whores’ to anyone who wants to take an enlightening trip into what I hope is an alternative future we’ll never reach. I received a gift copy of this book in exchange for an honest, non-reciprocal review.