My sister actually bought this story. I've read it in a sitting with the help of my girlfriend and we were both grinning when it ended. Let me see now.
Length - checked, long enough, I was satisfied mainly cause it had a start, a middle and an end that many stories in this genre totally lack. Characters - checked, the story is told through Deborah's eyes, some things I found believable, others not so much, but the plot is nice. The seduction scene is superb,long and very sensual, I personally liked it a lot.
A nice story by a good author to read on your ipad.
Excellent story, it keeps you in a guessing game, for the identity of the protagonist for a while. I would say that this is less of a short story and more of a novelette, but the author marks it clearly, as a short story and I have to respect that. A part-sequel of shorts, to the Living Sword Chronicles. I liked a lot.