The Finest Line
on July 29, 2013
I am trying to get through this story but I find it lacking passion. I mean if the girl is a virgin and he is supposedly completely in love with the girl, he does not say this "His grin was cheeky and evil as he hovered above her. “Virgin come, yum yum.” Really? No. But the story line is good but lacks lots of passion and chemistry. I have to give it 3 stars because lack of love scenes. They were very mechanical.