Amerigo Vesspucci


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Smashwords book reviews by Amerigo Vesspucci

  • The Brain Machine on Sep. 25, 2011

    Variations on this story have been told many times. The writing is relatively straight forward with average narrative. If you are drawn by the specifics summarized in the description its worth a read.
  • True Grit on Sep. 25, 2011

    Maybe this was intended for a very young audience, it is a simple story told in a simple style with a lot of modifiers. It also needs more editing work, see excerpt below: "Larry's dad had helped his son, who was older than me. They would be finished the route by now."
  • Blue Haired Alien Girlfriend on Sep. 29, 2011

    I found the writing to be a 5, really good and just propels you from one sentence to the next. The story itself was a 3 or 4. Nice work and worth a read.