betty horbaczek


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Smashwords book reviews by betty horbaczek

  • Clover on Dec. 24, 2013

    Arc review This is a tough review for me because I love books and well, I couldn't wait for this one to be over. For being over 400 pages you would think it would feel like a whole story but it never did. The style of writing is just all over the place in this story.  It just never seemed to complete a thought.  Having the male be the virgin didn't work either.  I honestly skipped over chapters to get through the book.  It jumped from past to present every other chapter but I DONT know why it did.  The past chapters didn't need to be there because it didn't help the story.  All the thoughts were jumbled the whole time and not enough detail if the past chapters were really to help the book out.  This book took me over four days to complete because I didn't even want to finish it.  The positive.  The details of parts of the book are great.  How she described the pond, and the scene with clovers boss, they were good.  A brief run down on the book, clover has a brother and his best friend Jake has been in live with her since he was ten.  Well clover comes back for the summer and they end up hooking up, but shocker Jakes a virgin.  I guess you can say there is a new.   No cliffhanger. No epilogue. Just the end. I honestly can not recommend this book.