I really enjoyed this tale from start to finish. Once you realize it's written in the "voice" of a young boy it goes quickly and smoothly. The characters were fun and engaging, the plot well done and tied up nicely at the end. I'm knocking off one star due to formatting/editing issues. It wasn't constant but enough to take me out of the story. Examples: "usuualy" for usually, "you" for your and so on. There was an awkward sentence or two that didn't get cleaned up on editing but do not let that stop you from downloading and reading this!
Again, very well written and I plan on checking out more by this author.