My 14th offering is a little different than what I'm used to writing. It's a narrative and an experiment in present tense fiction. It's about CJ, a lady who needs help getting her business off the ground. She finds help in the form of a philanthroper she met at a networking luncheon for small business owners. He wants to help, and she gives him a nice "downpayment." VERY erotic.
The twelfth short story in the Bedtime Stories series...
Carly's best friend and her brother's best friend decide to go out on a date together in the nightclub/restaurant she waitresses at. Little does she know she's the main course.
The 11th installment of my Bedtime Stories series.
David loves his wife Stephanie. He would never want to hurt her. But he falls victim to the wiles of her very sexy friend Maya, and even after he finds out they're friends, he commits an indiscretion that could end his marriage.
My 7th installment in my Bedtime Stories series is my most well-written. It's a story about a very intimate encounter between strangers at a gym. Well worth reading, and guaranteed to arouse the reader's imagination.
Published: September 29, 2011.
Fiction » Erotica » General
This is the first volume in my collection of short erotic stories. Monet, a sexy, stylish, spunky Chicago PR exec, ends up inheriting an unwanted "assignment," and gets punished for neglecting her responsibilities.
This book is dark, deep and brilliantly written. I'm very moved by the author's candidness about mental illnesses, a subject that has become extinct in our conversations and dealings. Here is a person who reached deep inside himself and spilled his soul out onto each page... and he did it so eloquently. I applaud him for bringing me to tears.
I apologize in advance for my review but I need to be blunt and very honest.
I read your review of a fun short story of mine. It was so ghastly that I had to see this perfection that you write. I must say this is not what I expected from such a harsh critic.
Your story is 15 pages long. 8 pages are a long lead-in. You really are not providing the reader with a good reason to proceed. In fact, this is unedited and you are taking quite some time to get to the erotic part, which was less edgy than I care for but it was nice. I'm giving you 3 stars solely because I feel we all should support each other's literary style while giving honest critiques. Please accept this as such.