on April 14, 2014 :
I'm afraid that I just didn't like this book at all. Firstly for such a short story, the punctuation and spelling etc were terrible. I really do find that criminal in such a short book. It hardly takes any time just to look for glaring mistakes. You can miss a few things like that in a long book but not in a tiny short story! Big long sentences full of commas and no full stops in sight. Far too many !!! in the most bizarre places. Sentence structure was non existent and missing/wrongly placed capital letters and punctuation made sentences sound stupid ie
'Then see what the situation was after that, Kate worked as an assistant bar manager at a golf club so she was told to take a few weeks off, same as Darius and Clare, they both worked at a Public House in Cromer so they were also told to wait for a call from their employers as to when to return to work.'
I found this very off-putting along with long winded descriptions of things I didn't care about(see above quote). I did not finish it.
(reviewed 86 days after purchase)