I'm a college student studying writing. I like to share my dirty imagination with erotica books for your pleasure. Many of my stories are based on personal experience.
on Aug. 21, 2012 :
I wanted to like it. I really did. There was some you could've added, and some you could've taken away. Watch your verb tense. There is potential here; I can see it. Proofreading and editing would be good. Keep writing. I'll keep reading.
(review of free book)