Rated 3.50/5 based on 2 reviews
Inspired commentary on faith, religion, and self-discovery.
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  • Category: Fiction » Poetry » Spiritual
  • Words: 2,280
  • Language: English
  • ISBN: 9781301904082

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Review by: fred garvin on Aug. 14, 2013 :
I have to respectfully disagree with the other review. I wasn't really distracted by lack of punctuation. I see poetry as a little more fluid, symbolic, and metaphorical that doesn't require the degree of punctuation that other genres require. I see the biblical significance of using the acrostic format, and here it is done in a unique and refreshing way. To me each work had a cohesive message that I admired and found inspiring. I added it to my library. Well done!
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Review by: Queen of Spades on Aug. 14, 2013 :
I applaud what you were trying to do in adopting the style of acrostic poetry for conveyance. However, I seek more concreteness to tie all of the lines to the central theme of each poem. More splashes of punctuation within the writings would have aided in the read being smoother, so that the sentences didn't seem like run-on sentences. In short, it looks like you, like the pieces, are still trying to find your way.

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