A Vampire in the Vatican 'Brotherhood of the Sword'

Rated 4.97/5 based on 37 reviews
Luciano Martinelli is fifty-two years old and an Inspector in the Vatican City Police. It’s been an easy life for him until one day he investigates five murders, all taking place inside the Vatican. This starts his journey into a world of evil and deceit, of pagan rituals and murder. Larger sample is available in 'The Unusual Cases of Inspector Martinelli Book 1'. More

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Published by Clover Digital Media
Words: 57,130
Box Set: Yes
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311290885
About Linda Arditto

I am a mystery woman. Older and therefore wiser I hope.

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Review by: TiraGP on July 14, 2017 :
The author really knows a lot about the inner workings of the Vatican and the Catholic church. I'm surprised nobody has written a story like this before, putting Vampires in the Vatican. The ever-present contrast between the detective, the priests and the bloodsuckers makes for some great suspense, surprises and action.
(reviewed 9 days after purchase)

Review by: Carol Shoar on July 13, 2015 :
An excellent mystery that had me hooked from the beginning. I like the Inspector, he does what is necessary to get the job done.
He hunts out the vampires in the Vatican even though they are trying to kill him. They do manage to kill a few others along the way.
Bodies keep turning up (and body parts) but it's not written in a gruesome way, very realistic.
A believable story that I enjoyed all the way to the end.
(reviewed 2 years after purchase)

Review by: Kevin Lokten on July 04, 2015 :
A lot of mystery and intrigue in this story. Very believable and quite frightening in parts.
A very good detective story with a lot of analysis and a great ending.
I enjoyed it very much.
(reviewed 38 days after purchase)

Review by: C. Bryce on May 03, 2015 :
I joined Smashwords to read this authors work after I met her. I have not been disappointed yet.
This is a wonderful and very realistic story.
Some of it is funny but in a normal everyday way.
I enjoyed it very much.
(reviewed 5 days after purchase)

Review by: Stanley Willow on April 04, 2015 :
I agree. This story flows nicely and didn't get boring at any time.
I like the Inspector, he gets the job done one way or another.
I like his analysis of different murders and how he works it all out in the end.
I laughed at the lemons part and felt very sad when some one close to him was killed.
Easy to read and follow.
Good book.
(reviewed 2 years after purchase)

Review by: Vito Veii on April 02, 2015 :
Looking for a story with mystery and intrigue with well-developed Characters, that will scare you, and have you wondering what is going to happen next. Then look no further. Here are the continuing adventures of Inspector Luciano Martinelli of the Vatican police. Follow the likable inspector and his friends as they seek to wipe out the vampire threat in the Vatican.
Further, the writer did an excellent job in keeping the story flowing and making me feel as if I was in the story, which kept me hooked right to the end.
(reviewed 2 years after purchase)

Review by: CarolynP on March 13, 2015 :
Well I've found an author that gives pure story with no clutter.
A Vampire in the Vatican was an exciting read for me.
LOTS of story and everything moved quickly.
I agree it's funny and sad and full of surprises.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)

Review by: Rowland Somers on March 07, 2015 :
I have to agree with the other reviewers, it's a great story. The Inspector is an interesting guy that just wants to get the job done. I didn't find it slow at the beginning, it jumped straight into the first five murders. I like the way the Inspector handles things as the story moves along. Easy to read with no bog down which is what I like. Great story and a few surprises and shocks. Very funny in parts and serious in others.
I recommend this read.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: DumbBlonde on Nov. 21, 2014 :
Good story. Easy to read and lots of different things happening throughout. Kept me interested to the very end.
Most enjoyable.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Kevin Fontain on May 19, 2014 :
Bought this book ages ago and didn't get around to reading it until today. Great story. I really like the characters and the storyline moves along nicely. The end was a big surprise.
Highly recommended.
(reviewed 6 months after purchase)

Review by: ChrisFrey, Jr on May 19, 2014 :
What a great story. I like the characters and the storyline. The ending was a surprise too. Smart guy Inspector Martinelli.
Easy read which is what I like.
Never a dull moment with this book.
(reviewed 62 days after purchase)

Review by: DanielCarter on March 22, 2014 :
Great story, but I found it a little scary in parts. Didn't know what was coming next and the ending was a big surprise.
Nicely written.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: RIP32 on March 11, 2014 :
This is my first attempt at writing a review so here goes.
I enjoyed every part of this book. It follows the path of an Inspector Martinelli from the Vatican City Police. He doesn't believe in vampires but when everything seems to point that way he goes with the flow. He adapts very well. The story is wonderful and not really scary but is believable.
I think this is how it would happen if it was really going on.
Lots of mystery and very easy to read and follow.
Good ending.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: sandra Bell on March 07, 2014 :
Didn't take long to get past the background story and the rest was wonderful. Not really spooky but very believable. Inspector Martinelli is a great character, he seems like an ordinary guy which is another thing I liked. He tries to plan ahead but with no knowledge about vampires he does very well. A couple of 'shockers' through the story and it didn't get boring at anytime (I didn't have to 'skip' pages).
Great ending that I would never have guessed.
(reviewed 53 days after purchase)

Review by: Harry Kay on March 06, 2014 :
Found this book a bit slow at first but finished up a great story. Really like the Inspector and Franco, Graeco and the coroner. The characters are good. Lot's of different things happening which keeps it interesting. It's definitely believable and a most enjoyable read.
(reviewed 52 days after purchase)

Review by: Lorna Smith on Jan. 17, 2014 :
Wonderful light reading. The author is very versatile with her writing skills and covers multiple subjects in her books.
Like other reviewers I found it believable and showed the Catholic church in a good light.
The characters are well rounded without giving us an in depth description of them which leaves some mystery. I agree it was sad in parts and funny in others, a nice balance.
A few surprises which added to the intrigue.
A good read to start after dinner and finish by bedtime.
I am going to make a point of leaving it for a week and reading it again.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Trevor Compro on Jan. 13, 2014 :
Good story with interesting characters. Very believable and quite a few surprises. Different than I'd thought it would be.
The ending was great.
Highly Recommended.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Trent F on Jan. 08, 2014 :
Another great book which makes this author a winner with me.
Believable story and totally different from all the other stories I've read from this author.
Nice and easy to read which is what I like and didn't take me that long to read (an afternoon).
Highly recommended if you like vampire books without romance interfering.
(reviewed 61 days after purchase)

Review by: Peter Stephan on Jan. 02, 2014 :
I've read this book three times and I haven't finished with it yet. Nice and easy to read, very realistic and I like the characters. I agree its both funny and sad in parts with lots of surprises especially at the end.
(reviewed 35 days after purchase)

Review by: Duncan Dennison on Dec. 31, 2013 :
I really enjoyed this story. Haven't had time to do much reading lately but this was a pleasure to read. Written simply so even I could read it with no hiccups. Definitely a winner for me that I will read again soon.
(reviewed 18 days after purchase)

Review by: Philip Brewster on Dec. 27, 2013 :
Bought this a while ago and didn't get around to reading it. What a great story! Like the other reviewers I like the characters and the storyline. Very believable. Easy to read. Doesn't offend the church. Could have happened and we wouldn't know.
(reviewed 14 days after purchase)

Review by: Rachael Martin on Dec. 15, 2013 :
Read this today.
Great story and if it became a movie I'd be first in the queue to buy a ticket.
The other reviewers have said it all and I can't think of anything to add.
This is my style of book.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: John Spencer on Dec. 07, 2013 :
Great story. Yes I'd like to see it on film. Not complicated to read which made it a pleasure. Good characters. Enjoyable storyline and different from other vampire books I've read.
Finished nicely which gave it a good conclusion but did leave room for a follow up.
(reviewed 7 days after purchase)

Review by: Mary Clyde on Dec. 04, 2013 :
This author was recommended to me as I'm not much of a book reader.
I found it a good story. I liked the Inspector and his off sider Franco. Full of surprises. Didn't get bored at any time which is what I like in a book.
Easy to read and a terrific ending.
It was a pleasure.
(reviewed 4 days after purchase)

Review by: John Toad on Dec. 03, 2013 :
Love the story and was not bored at any point.
Not much I can say as the other reviewers have said it all.
5 stars for the way it's written and the storyline.
(reviewed 5 days after purchase)

Review by: Daniel Lockyer on Nov. 29, 2013 :
This author was recommended to me and I'd thought I'd give this one a look first.
Really enjoyed the story. I didn't get to see the short stories a few talk about but to read it in one sitting was great.
Nice flowing storyline. Good characters, who aren't perfect.
Interesting twists. Lot's of surprises.
Yes, funny and sad.
Cool ending. :)
Easy to read.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)

Review by: cassy arditt on Nov. 28, 2013 :
WOW this was totally different than the last book I read by this author. Great story and spooked me a little, just a little. :)
Fascinating characters, just like ordinary people. Nicely written, I found it easy to follow which was relaxing.
Yes it was funny and sad. Very sad. I didn't click to what was going to happen so it surprised me.
Story is believable, lots of mystery and the end was terrific, it just wrapped it all up.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: David Mantor on Nov. 27, 2013 :
Just finished it. What a great story. I thought the lemons were funny too.
This guy, Martinelli is having to sort this out on his own and doing a great job most of the time.
The sad part others are talking about was quite a surprise although I did suspect something was wrong before it came out.
I get the idea after the first encounter with a vampire, Martinelli had some warning from a higher plane. Yes, he was meant to be there at the end even though there were those on the same side that didn't want him there.
Easy reading. Great story all the way to the finish.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Freda Mantor on Nov. 10, 2013 :
Superb. Excellent storyline. Wonderful down to earth characters.
You don't know what's going to happen next.
I enjoyed every part of this book.
(reviewed 2 days after purchase)

Review by: Tom Canter on Nov. 06, 2013 :
I'm another that has been waiting for this book to be published.
I was not disappointed.
What a great story. It took me four hours to read which was perfect for me.
I read the other reviews but don't believe I could have managed what Martinelli did. I suppose he figured he had nothing to lose.
Very believable storyline. Yes, it gets faster and faster as it continues. BIG surprise with one of the main characters, very sad.
Very good 'twists' through the book and the ending is incredible (as far as storytelling goes) .
The parchment is definately the key to the whole outcome, except the final page.
As Daryn said, it doesn't offend the Catholic church. I didn't think so and it's explained why a vampire is in pain when a crucifix is before them. Great stuff.
5 stars again foir the author.
(reviewed 6 days after purchase)

Review by: John Bull on Nov. 06, 2013 :
Sad in parts, funny in others.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Britanny Lowden on Nov. 06, 2013 :
Great ending!!
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Full of surprises and very realisic.
Yes, it would make a good film.
5 stars.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Bess Torman on Nov. 04, 2013 :
I read the three shory stories and was waiting for part 4 when I discovered the author had brought it out in one book.
I love this story. The many twists that turn up through the book, the Inspectors frustration, the wonderful characters.
I agree with Bronwyn, we could do this in the Inspectors situation, a little courage, a lot of intelligence and a damn good reason.
The ending was fantastic and I could never guess what was coming up next as I turned each page. It is believable and it was good to get away for awhile from fantasy vampire books. (I do know this is fiction)
I highly recommend this book, but don;t read it late at night like I did.
(reviewed 4 days after purchase)

Review by: Samantha Kirk on Nov. 02, 2013 :
This book was recommended to me by a friend. I don't normally read books about vampires but she was so insistant. I'm glad I read this one.
Great story. Sad. Funny. Very believable.
The unexpected is always happening and this book MAKES SENSE. The clues are there and I actually went back a few times to make sure things weren't happening that hadn't been mentioned.
An excellent read and a great story.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Clover Digital Media on Nov. 01, 2013 :
It seems I wasn't the only one waiting to read the rest of this story.
I love the characters in this book. They are believable as is the storyline.
I enjoyed all the surprises and there are a quite a few especially at the end. It's a rollercoaster ride as it's written from the inspector's perspective.
You can see him mentally deteriorating as time passes. His guilt comes across very well which makes him a 'real' person. It isn't predictable and that's another thing I liked. I recommend this book to those that enjoy mystery and suspense.
It is written simply and the author is a great storyteller.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Daryn Walters on Nov. 01, 2013 :
Like Bronwyn I grabbed this book as soon as it appeared too. It seems like I'd been waiting for ever to read the rest of the story but it's only been a few weeks.
Where do I start?
Yes, it starts slow but I'm happy with that. Getting to know the characters and crimes that the Inspector has no clues to guide him. Then the piece of parchment appears. This is the key to everything but you don't know this. The author makes you believe it only assisted to solve the first group of murders. There is a great 'twist' at the end of the first part. Very clever. But then we move on, different murders that young Father Graeco helps with. He is really likeable as is the coroner.
I love the bit about the 'lemons', very funny.
Then it gets down to serious business, the Inspector is really screwed over and blames himself for what happens. This is the sad part (I'm not giving it away).
His attitude changes from this point, he starts to smoke again (gave it up 5 years ago). Then he meets a 'Knight of Christ' (probably shouldn't have mentioned that). This is when things start moving fast and you see the pieces fitting in to place as does the Inspector.
I like him very much, and yes, like Bronwyn I believe it could be in all of us to do this but the Inspector is very intelligent and has a good memory, probably why he made Inspector in the first place.
It keeps you going to very last page. I'd love to see it in movie form and I didn't feel that it offended the Catholic Church at all. Very believable story.
Easy to read which is what I like after a hard day at work.
Worth every cent of the price.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Bronwyn Pillar on Nov. 01, 2013 :
I grabbed this book as soon as it appeared. After reading the first three parts that were here as short stories I had to read the rest.
I noticed it had been revamped (excuse the expression) .
What a fantastic story. It starts slow and then accelerates, by the time I was just over half way I couldn't put it down, all the way to the last page.
First there's a 'twist' and an easy kill. Then it gets more intriguing but the Inspector handles everything wonderfully. The next part is heartbreaking as you now know the characters. A trip to the 'bowels of the earth' and a real scare during the second part. The main character is totally believable as is the story. Anyone could do what he did, all you would need is a little courage, a good reason, and a bit of intelligence. I'm going to curl up tonight with a hot chocolate and read it again. :)
(reviewed the day of purchase)

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