I agree with some others that this one was brief.
If you think about it though, a blowjob on a plane
full of people would be very brief! And the thought
of being able to get away with that out in the open is very
erotic for both people! I can't wait to read the next one!
I don't think this one was as hot as the first one but it was the content itself that I liked. Learning a bit more about Abby and Brian as well as the sneaky way she wanted to get her boyfriend off. LOL
I loved it, it was quick but sometimes quick is good; the story overall was very good, it was very enjoyable and descriptive without being over the top. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work.