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on Aug. 20, 2014 :
Nice writing and a cool plot line make this book a cool piece of authorized fan fiction in the world of the best game ever, Wasteland.
However, loses some points for amateur formatting issues. There are no paragraph breaks or indents, messing up the flow and pacing of the reading (it's surprising how much this can hurt a reading experience). This problem exists on the kindle, mobi, and pdf versions.
To the authors: the Smashwords style guide details how to avoid this issue. Or if you are having problems with it, contact a fellow e-author at my Facebook page (I already Kickstarted the thing, I might as well help with formatting too :) https://www.facebook.com/paulie.gatto.9
(reviewed the day of purchase)