Urges of a Trophy Wife

Adult Erotica
Rated 2.00/5 based on 1 reviews
Scarlet is a beautiful trophy wife. She has it all. She just wants more.

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Candace Mia lives on a farm in the Midwest. She spends her days taking care of animals and tending fields. At night, she likes to curl up with a good erotica tale. She has recently decided to try her hand at writing stories of her own. She hopes that you enjoy the products of her wandering mind.

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David Blake reviewed on on Aug. 17, 2015

This is erotica at its blandest, I'm afraid. There's a token attempt to give the main character, Scarlet some kind of background and raison d'etre, which is better than nothing, but then it's a very prosaic attempt to titilate by describing that character sneaking away from her sleeping husband for a 'bit of the other' with his friend who is in a neighbouring bedroom.

The descriptions are basic and mundane. There's little sense of feeling or emotion. Even the experience of Scarlet having having her first orgasm in ages is limited a mention that 'my whole body shivered'.

The writer needs to learn that good erotica stems from characters with depth, a deeper exploration of emotion and sensuality, a more enticing build-up and intelligent imagery to represent the actual lovemaking. Crude, repetitive mentions of genital areas drag it down to a level akin to a young teenager trying hard to impress his peers by daring to use rude words.

There were also a few errors evident in this short piece. For example 'my husband's fried Ed', 'Ed still worked out and had a muscular built' and so on. And the book's interior has the title as ' Urges of a Rich Wife' rather than Trophy Wife.
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