Short indeed! But this little teaser makes me want the rest of the story, without hating the author for only telling me this much.
I lost myself in the pronouns once, but I think that was just due to the short, brief entitlement of the choosing or hem hawing of the reader (me) as to whom I was to believe was the pivotal, or main character.
Thanks for a quiet little jaunt.
(review of free book)