Underneath

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An ancient city, entombed beneath a museum that seeks to understand the brutal race that once inhabited the underground world.

A young woman with special empathic powers offered a job to create an exhibit of the city's artifacts.

Underneath, they wait for her.

This is a 11,000 word short story.
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About Heather Marie Adkins

Heather Marie Adkins is an independent fiction novelist and avid bibliophile with the library to prove it. She is the author of several upcoming novels including paranormal mystery "The Temple", the fantasy novel "Abigail", and chick lit novel "Constant State of Disaster". She is currently working on numerous projects, including a collection of paranormal romance short stories and the first in a new witchcraft series. A practicing Witch, Heather lives in North Central Kentucky with a house full of animals and the love of her life - all of whom drive her crazy. She can be found daily (mostly) at http://heather.bishoffs.com.

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Review by: Sandy on Dec. 09, 2011 : star star star star
Detailed, fast-paced action loaded with solid characters creating an book that I didn't want to put down. What exactly was so sinister about the Garneria exhibit that Rebecca had troubles with it? The author did a good job getting the action up to speed quickly and the suspense was building rapidly in the beginning chapters. I would have given it 5 stars as I like a quick-read with good suspense, good plot and also a read that leaves me as a reader hanging with some possiblities but....I thought the ending was rushed. Chapter 9 was the end of this story and a catch all: a huge wrap up, a "I am about to run-out-of-paper so I have to cram it all down to a couple paragraphs", to me, the last chapter was a disappointment
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Review by: Jessica Bronder on Sep. 26, 2011 : star star star star star
Rebecca has just been offered an exhibit at the Museum of Ancient History. The idea is to promote the underground city that was found in a cavern below the museum. But something evil happened there. Rebecca is an empath and has no desire to even go near the city but in the end she goes.

Adara, Rebecca’s daughter, is excited about the new exhibit. And Rebecca’s new boss, Darren, is also thrill to have her there. Rebecca learns that Darren is also an empath when he talks about a bad feeling when he is around the underground city. But that doesn’t stop them from working on the exhibit.

While working together, Rebecca and Darren start a connection that goes to the next level. Then Darren doesn’t show up for work. Knowing something is wrong and with the urgings of Adara goes on the hunt for him.

This is a great story!! Way too short. I read it quickly and was left wanting more. The only thing negative I could say was I wish it was longer. I would like to know more about the underground city. I cannot wait to read Heather’s other stories.
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Review by: Shéa MacLeod on Aug. 05, 2011 : star star star star star
This short story really captured my attention and held it all the way through. I love archaeology and the paranormal so this was right up my alley. I would have loved to know more about the ancient civilization and where they came from, etc, but this WAS a short story. Not a novel. lol Two thumbs up! Thoroughly enjoyable.
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Review by: Alan Nayes on Aug. 04, 2011 : star star star star star
If you like archaeology, ancient civilizations, and tortuous sacrifices--you'll love this. Very fast read! Enjoyed it.
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Review by: Gail on Aug. 02, 2011 : star star star star star
Would love to see some more like this...I got creeped out with this one.
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Review by: Yllektra V. on June 18, 2011 : star star star star star
I really liked this story.
The protagonist is fierce and brave and quite sarcastic and I love that in a heroine.
Plus, the plot was really good and suspenseful till the very end.
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Review by: Joey Jones on June 10, 2011 : star star star star
Very nice short story. Kept me interested the entire time.
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Review by: Julia Crane on June 10, 2011 : star star star star star
What a great short story! The characters came alive on the pages. I look forward to reading more from this author.
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