All Night Long, I Remember You

Rated 3.25/5 based on 4 reviews
They fell in love when their past wouldn't have allowed them to. Two friends crossed the boundaries of a horizon where only a few had gone. Those who survived vowed never to return again. Will the future be kinder? More
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Words: 5,350
Language: English
ISBN: 9781465864963
About Rona Go

Rona Go graduated with a major in Philosophy and took up her Masters in Theology. She tried law school for a while but had to quit when she had been barfing more of the legal terms than learning from them. She taught for a while but realized she enjoyed herself more as a computer geek managing and designing websites.

She has been a thousand and one characters in her lifetime. And her story still continues. However, at the end of the day, she is a storyteller and storywriter.

Her idea of a protagonist is one who is heroic and dark at the same time and her preference for a villain is your regular villain but with a heart.

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Review by: Margaret (Literary Chanteuse) on May 21, 2012 :
The intense emotion and desperation came across to the reader brilliantly however the story was an okay read.
(review of free book)

Review by: Marcia Carrington on Jan. 29, 2012 :
An unusual, original short story which speaks of love and pain, and makes its points with bold paint strokes. The ending for me was appropriate in keeping with the story's muted tone as a whole, and satisfying in and, of itself.
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Review by: Kari Moorehead on Aug. 19, 2011 :
I don't like the ending. The future wasn't kind to them. It made me cry. I wonder what happen to her after? I hope she falls in love again...but still remember.

But the thing I like about the story is that the girl chose to value life instead of death. Lesson learned.

My favorite line: I smiled to myself and saw that indeed turtles were dancing with glee. They performed their dances none of the human eyes have seen. I saw them, but I continued to dream, for me and my son.

Wish you luck, Rona!

Kari
(review of free book)

Review by: T.J. Edison on Aug. 19, 2011 :
I read the first two lines:

I thought I would get used to the bumpy roads leading to the City of Taragona eventually. I left the place eleven years ago and nothing seemed to change.

In my humble opnion, they sound better thus:

I thought I would eventually get used to the bumpy roads leading to the City of Taragona. I'd left the place eleven years ago and nothing had changed.

The dialogue was in part, meaningful.

This long and wordy account needs editing, the punctuation, the syntax and sentence structure, the typos and the tenses need to be dealt with.

Not that I'm perfect, but editing is part of writing.

That's the good thing about writing, you don't have to get it right first time, not like a brain surgeon.

So, Rona, go through this with your fine tooth-comb and polishing brush.

Best of luck,

Melanie (Author name)

And the best of luck.
(review of free book)

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