Mary Haden

Smashwords book reviews by Mary Haden

  • Wolf Medicine on Sep. 09, 2012

    The story's concept is good; delivery is not. While there were several parts that received adequate attention, for the majority of my read, I felt that the author's development of character and plot was skimpy. As a reader, I want more. This is the lowest rating I've ever given to an author's work. Whether a 'read' is free or paid for I expect quality writing. I want to find myself immersed in the story, invested in the characters, and so much a part of the setting that I feel its reality. That was not the case in "Wolf Medicine". My hope is that the author's subsequent writings will evidence a greater maturity and that perhaps that this title would undergo an intensive rewrite.